USE TRANSITIONAL EXPRESSIONS. Special words
and prhases which show the relationships between ideas are the most obvious
transitional expressions. You use them all the time; some of the
most familiar are simple connecting words like but, and , or
and for. Others include however, inasmuch, in spite of
all this, on the other hand. Transitional phrases help to show
the internal relationships of words and phrases within sentences, and sentences
within paragraphs, but they also show the larger relationships within the
whole composition by linking paragraphs and by showing how one idea flows
into another.
USE STRUCTURAL LINKAGE. It is not only through
the more obvious transitional expressions that unity is gained. Relationships
between ideas are often established through your use and repetition of
key words and phrases. But you must be careful not to repeat so much
that you oversimplify your writing; simple repetition can be easily overcome,
once you realize the importance of varying your phrases. Stegner
avoids the monotony of mere repetition by using synonyms, reference words
(such as pronouns) and by rephrasing; notice how "town," "community,"
and "civilization" are used to avoid repetition of one word.
ASSIGNMENT. Select one of the following topics.
Arrive at your controlling idea and state this in a sentence. Then
decide on a method of organization. Finally, write at least 3 paragraphs
developing the controlling idea. Be careful to establish transitional elements
between sentences and paragraphs.
a. the attic-a family history
b. a family reunion
c. the most difficult thing about college
d. what it's like to grow up Adventist (or any other
denomination)